Decent storyline but it took too long to get there and was a bit boring in the middle. Had the opportunity to be a slow burn, but instead still comes off as an insta-romance. Probably because we're told in past tense of meaningful conversations that take place between the H and h, but not carried along for them. h narrator is also a bit monotone which doesn't help things.
Ceecee
2023-08-24
Decent storyline but it took too long to get there and was a bit boring in the middle. Had the opportunity to be a slow burn, but instead still comes off as an insta-romance. Probably because we're told in past tense of meaningful conversations that take place between the H and h, but not carried along for them. h narrator is also a bit monotone which doesn't help things.